One concern I have in evaluating this and several of your other drawings, is the absence of doors for the landing gear. This makes it difficult to visualize the stance the aircraft would have on the ground.
Overall, this design, and others, seem to me to be very long in the nose and very long in the tail, which would seem to make visibility difficult on takeoff - particularly as some of the very deep air scoops/radiators would imply a rather long undercarriage leg.