Shouldn't Alioth look like this and not like HMS Formidable? I'm not sure what you can use as a starting point for a picture of Alioth, maybe HMS Hermes with a lot of work.
I was just posting the OOB Canis gave to me...word for word.
As for the embelishment of the Carrier success, that seems to follow standard U.S. fleet exersize results.
I would have thought Alioth would have expended her planes after two strikes, but then again I'm thinking about WW2 level AAA fire out of habit.